The class that night was equally as enjoyable. When it came time to review my story, I learned that they loved the first part, but were divided on the second. One of them was adamant that the ending should be changed. Another was confused by the jump-cut action. Their input made me want to rush home to fix it (which of course is always my thought and is never my reality, because I don't get home until after ten and am normally exhausted).
But - Challenge Accepted. I shall fix it. And then, if it works, I shall submit it.
Today we went to the Getty museum.
This was in the gardens... |
I also received two letters from fans. So I head into another week of work inspired and hopeful that I can make time for both Samantha Rialto and the crazy events of April Undercover as well as several other writing projects....and exercise...and family...and myself....
I'm an overachiever.
I saw that review, and downloaded the first three books to my Kindle. I couldn't put them down. Excellent, fast-paced and kept me guessing until the end! I can't wait for the next one!
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